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After putting all three sections together as one, I realized that I needed to make some changes. The sections didn’t really flow well together so I had to add ways for my reader to interpret that these were in fact all related. I feel that my introduction and literature review need a lot of work. I think I have a pretty good handle on the methods section but I know there is always room for improvement. From here I will make the necessary changes to improve the overall quality of my paper. Hooking the reader from start to finish is essential so I need to make some vital changes keeping this in mind. Also, I feel that I might be struggling with an audience. This is something I need to work on.